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Hopes & Dreams

 
 
Reply Thu 23 Dec, 2004 06:50 pm
Hopes & Dreams



If it were never for dreams, whether awake or asleep
We would never know hope - an intangible to keep.

Some say hopes are not real - desires bent on ashes.
Some say dreams are so real - here is where this myth clashes.

A hope is a sure thing, needing one-step to be real.
Both demi-saints & despots are aware of this appeal.

With selfish desires and a cunning clever word
Destroy millions of souls - history wrote by what it has heard.

If hopes and dreams are ashes of fools,
Remember Phoenix used these same tools.

What right has a foul mouth to quash that not yet begun?
"First-step" courage, known not - but needles as a substitute gun.

To the hopeful wise and the wakened dreamer's draw,
Going one-step beyond courage is their strong, unwritten law.

With sarcasm's stench, lives or nations cannot breathe.
Sarcasm is as a language without profit to relieve.

Hopes and dreams, on life's other hand
As said, "Is Eternal" - that which scoffers cannot stand.

So hope beyond hope, thou low grieving soul,
An eternal desire simply has no toll.

The cost of hope fading is a deep no-end pit.
Why pay for nothing only because you quit?

And dream on wakened dreamers, the stars wait for you above.
For it was your hopes and dreams that gave the world -


LOVE.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jan, 2005 10:04 am
Thanks for the link, TM. I'm not normally a fan of rhyming verse, but you write with such heart, I was hooked. This was moving. I particularily liked the Phoenix reference, with it's promise of rebirth.
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truemale
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jan, 2005 10:23 am
TU, Cav...some of my poems rhyme, some don't and the reason is, well...As I put on my personal introductory cards when I first meet people...

"HOW I write is for ME...
WHAT I write is for YOU."

Hey...have a great day...and if you can't have a great day, have a TERRIFIC day !!

PBWY

tm
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jan, 2005 10:28 am
I plan on having a great day, but we'll see how the dentist appointment goes. Laughing
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truemale
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jan, 2005 10:34 am
Going to the dentist is about the only time I would encourage someone to FROWN...!!! Very Happy

tm
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jan, 2005 10:40 am
It's a bit of a worry, I haven't been in probably 3-4 years.
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truemale
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jan, 2005 10:51 am
Eh...nothing to it...the only time you have to wake up is when the dentist says, "Hmmm..."

(hahahaha)


tm
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