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healing/friendship poems

 
 
Reply Thu 16 Dec, 2004 03:05 pm
conceal

a moment t soon
your presence so late/
do i hope for destiny
or wait for fate/
prediction of action
asumption of guilt/
supresses emotions
that relationships are built/
acceptance of self
one who is coping with a burn/
sheilded by intuition
guided by a passion to heal and learn/
its my own guilt i see
its never been this clear/
theres only one place that your friendship belongs/
and i have healed that place for you, without fear.................


look deep into this peom and break it down, sentance by sentance, you might see a bit of someone you know, or a situation you remember. when it comes to mind call that person and read it to them and tell them to do the same.......???? something might make sense
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