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sour love poems

 
 
Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 03:02 pm
Too Late

you say its too late
your words are so fake
this pain wont go away
what do i do

i try and think of where it went wrong
all i see is your face then your gone
i've hated you for so long
but now its over for good

tainted by his touch
my love is no longer enough
your words are so real, so rough
your not the same person i know

i hate behind this mask that some call a face
maybe someday ill grow out of it, or leave this place
my hunger is no longer your love, i don't even want a taste
and now i realize its never too late


rob
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 09:51 pm
Most well done, Psych. Very enjoyable!
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