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near death poems

 
 
Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 01:17 pm
Pulse
life is borrowed
i owe you mine/
take it back when your ready
let your light shine/
dead man walking
its dark and i cant see/
life is sufficating me to death
and i cant breathe/
dont try and wake me
i'm already there/
i dont wanna come back
breathing has left me scared.

this poem was writtin about my own feelings in one of my most hard times of my life...it was writtin to a song i wrote on accoustic guitar .
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 01:35 pm
Psycho,

That is an awesome and powerful piece. I hope you are well now.
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