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Unhappy

 
 
Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 09:29 pm
I can't focus on love
I can't focus on life
I can't sit down
and release this strife.

I'm unhappy in life
I'm unhappy in love
I'm so everywhere
that I can't rise above.

I wish I was this
I wish I was that
I try so hard
but I always go back.

To the walls that keep caving in
To the tunnel with no end
To my life and my love
I cannot mend.



Note: Yeah yeah...I know you guys don't like the "ohh I feel sorry for myself routine" but this is what was on my mind tonight, so sorry....lol
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danni-lee
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 09:37 pm
its ok , i go through phases like that all the time, my outlet is painting, i have some strange pictures because of it!
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Joe Nation
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 09:40 pm
Hey, SUFP, things will change, you can bet on that, meanwhile pay no attention to naysayers, don't even ignore them.

and you can let off a little angst anytime you want here at A2K, that's why we are here.

Joe ( once had a bad day once) Nation
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 09:40 pm
Hehe....yeah...I try to express myself through words and converting my words to music....I just can't ind any alone time right now......
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 09:41 pm
Thanks Joe, I appreciate!
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roger
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 09:45 pm
Never cheered anyone up in my life, so just waller in it. We'll still love you.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 03:37 am
A most excellent set of biting emotions, pessimist. Cheer up! Failing that, keep posting this wonderful, painful poetry of yours!
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Brand X
 
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 08:19 am
Keep exorcising that demon til it's all gone, stand up!

Thanks for sharing!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 09:05 am
Thanks you guys for being so supportive.
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sozobe
 
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 09:06 am
(Hi Brand X! Haven't seen you around much.)

Yup, writing can be excellent therapy, and you get to hone a craft at the same time. Keep it up!
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