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Predestination--Consummation.........................

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sat 11 Dec, 2004 07:23 pm
Circles of eternity,
Just the rim and lines and segments
Bisect our ge-om-e-try.
Plane or solid,
Weak or stolid,
Mind or soul or psyche be,
Reduced to all the lowest levels,
You're still you, and I'm still me.

Sorority--fraternity.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2004 10:20 am
Love how you make physical the ge-om-e-try, Ms. Letty. Superlative work.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2004 10:57 am
Kelly, I have no idea from whence cameth that poem. <smile>

When I went to a local store to get some basics, there was a large jar sitting on the counter which was labeled Harryoke. It showed a small snapshot of a musician who had been injured in an accident and was supine with a medical halo to prevent movement of the neck and spine, I guess.
Since he did Karaoke, he choose that stage name. I felt an overwhelming sense of sorrow, and I put money in the jar. Some kid standing there said, "Cool", and had a big smile on his face. That must have been the inspiration.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2004 11:33 am
Oh, my Gawd, Kelly. It was your poem, "In Small Circles..." That was the major part of the inspiration. Are you dealing in subliminal messaging? Smile
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2004 11:34 am
Ja :-)
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