@centrox,
Referring to your question "What about this then?
( " Four a.m. in the morning
Carried away by a moonlight shadow." ) by Michael Gorden Oldfield
Very nice. The first line may have been intentionally left open to speculation as to whether he had been awake all night or if it expresses the peace of awakening in the pre-dawn hours.The second line could either mean that he was comforted by the life-long dependability of the moon, that he was perhaps lost in the memory of a less-lonely time in the moonlight, or maybe even feelings of the
mockery of the "lovers' moon"
What about this then?
320am
It's all too much to keep within.
She died on my chest,
her head under my chin.
She was my kitty
for sixteen years.
Even after six months
I still cry sweet tears