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Ecstasy

 
 
Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:17 am
Ecstasy~G.A.A.

Is this love,
slavery
or addiction?
When I'm thinking of you
my heart feels such tension.
I can't descern
do you have me tied to you?
are you a chemical?
or is this love?...
I lose my breathe
and I can hardly think straight
when you're kissing me
caressing me..
Am I your slave?
Are you my drug?
Or am I in love?
If you set a trap for me,
I fell in.
If you're expecting me to get an unreal high from you
and never leave you all by yourself.
I'm by your side till the end of time.
If you're opressing me
I'll slave for your love.
If I'm playing the game of love
since I found you
I won.
Is this love,
slavery,
or addiction?
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:45 am
What an interesting piece! One of those poems where, once injected, it leaves you craving for more :-)
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:48 am
Thank you Smile
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Vex86
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 02:47 pm
nice work
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Brand X
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 03:33 pm
Nice!
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apoeticinjustice
 
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Reply Sat 11 Dec, 2004 07:49 am
I'm addicted, very goood work.
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2004 09:45 pm
thank you all! :-D
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