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Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:16 am
That's What I Hope~G.A.A
I hope you choke
on all the things you said to me
everytime you got mad at me
at me, or anyone.
I hope every snake like move you made
finds it's way back to you
and slaps you in the face
harder than you've ever been slapped before
or ever will be slapped.
I hope every lie that crawled between your teeth
and spat it's way out of your lips
sneaks up behind you
and knocks your feet out from under you.
I hope you realize one day
the real reasons I left you
and I hope for those reasons
you can never forgive yourself
that's what I hope.
I can quite feel the anger on that one. Sounds much like a letter I'd write to my ex too. hehe
Well done.
Well thank you..and yes..it is for an ex...
Ex boyfriends are a pain..I am with a much better guy now. my poem You Make Me Feel is for him.
there's nothing like putting raw emotions into words to heal old wounds. I've written many similar pieces about my ex. Excellent job!