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You Make Me Feel

 
 
Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:15 am
You Make Me Feel~G.A.A
For Erin,(my boyfriend) who is the blessing in my life..

Just when I thought I'd figured life out
when I thought that was how I was supposed to be treated
just when I thought I was only worthy of being treated half way decent
you came along
and showed me what it meant to really care.
You make me feel worth something.

I used to look in the mirror
and be able to find a million things wrong with myself
I used to want to be one of the gorgeous girls
but when you let me know just how pretty I really am,
I realize I don't need to change.
You make me feel beautiful.

When I'm feeling nervous
and want to crawl in a corner and hide
when things just aren't going my way
and all I seem to do is complain
yet you listen to me anyways
and tell me I'll be ok.
When you pull me out of the sadness
you make me feel happy.

When you slide your fingers
in between mine
when you look at me
with your gorgeous eyes
and give me that look
that I would die for
when your lips meet mine
and you kiss me so tenderly
when you tell me you love me
I feel loved,
because I know I really am.

When I found you
I wasn't sure of anything in life.
But now that I have you,
I know what it's like to feel worth something,
what it's like to feel beautiful.
I know what it's like to feel happy,
what it's like to feel loved,
and to love.
Now that I have you
I can feel.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:44 am
A very nice and gentle tribute, DC. Well done!
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:49 am
Thank ya thank ya.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 01:52 am
This poem seems, thematically, to run counter to your others. What gives?
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2004 10:35 pm
lol if you're asking what I think you're asking..all the others were about an old boyfriend..but this is a new one..he's amazing.correct me if I answered the question the wrong way..lol.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 12:18 am
Aha! That's it :-)
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 05:38 pm
lol yes.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 05:47 pm
Sorry, dc...I can't relate to this one, I wish I could though, really. I'm glad everything is going great for you though, and i'm also glad you made it back to a2k.....we missed ya....later!
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2004 05:56 pm
Hey! I was lookin for ya here on a2k, it's good to be back. It's ok that you can't relate to this one, I'm sure there's some you can...
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