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Death's Final Wish

 
 
Reply Wed 8 Dec, 2004 12:50 pm
Holding her heart in his hands,
stroking it oh so gently.
Everything that he demands
all in this moment so dementedly.

Her final seconds on this earth,
a world so empty and cold.
Her cheeks smudged with dirt,
soon buried in the mould.

Walking away from the grave,
still with her heart so close.
It mentally beats like a wave,
everything might be as it shows.

No tears and no sorrow,
no laughter and no joy.
No today and no tomorrow,
no girl and no boy.

Days and nights went by,
he couldn't get any sleep.
Though she'd always lie,
his love for her was deep.

He let it be for a while,
but soon realized the pain.
She could no longer be vile,
but he was soon insane.

His pain ripped him apart,
needed to feel her skin.
He grabbed her molested heart,
and decided to let her win.

He went back and placed the heart,
deep inside her chest.
Waited for it to start,
like it had all been a jest.

No sound and no laughter,
no touching and no kissing.
Nothing now and nothing after,
no lust and everything missing.

He pulled her into his lap,
and held her oh so tight.
Pretending she's having a nap,
telling himself "she might!"

His tears fell down on her chin,
the boy had been strong.
Keeping everything within,
holding it back for so long.

He was on the edge of dying,
his heart about to burst.
He was the one lying,
he was the one and the worst.

Curling up tight against her,
he shivered and gasped for air.
Didn't know she did this to lure,
that she needed to make it all fair.

Final breathe was so painful,
breaking every bone.
She laughed heartless and deathful,
turning his body to stone.

Now she had got what she wanted,
she didn't have to leave alone.
Now he was no longer haunted,
And she could stop to moan.

No tears and no sorrow,
Some laughter and some joy
No today and no tomorrow.
A dead girl and a dead boy

© Veronica 'ZeIcebird'

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Might be kinda long, but it was so hard to finish it off earlier Very Happy
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 8 Dec, 2004 05:59 pm
A most outstanding effort, ZeIcebird, and welcome to this great writing forum!
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ZeIcebird
 
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 07:33 pm
Hehe - Thanks Wink
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apoeticinjustice
 
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Reply Thu 16 Dec, 2004 08:29 am
very nice ZeIcebird, thanks for posting
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