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Tue 7 Dec, 2004 06:06 am
Or Venus, if you will,
in expectation
of puffed balloons,
blessings,
things undone,
sung,
unstrung,
in triads.
Indeed! Well versed, my friend!
Thanks kelly! I'm going for compression these days. I love the challenge of what I can express in the fewest words.
And, as you can see - I went the other way :-)
Yes, but I admire your talent for doing so.
I love your work because I can really sink my teeth into it, so to speak.
Your words are too kind, mighty Cav :-) Your poetry is both timeless and inspirational, if I do humbly say so myself!
My words are honest, hardly too kind.
Well then, my honest friend, give me some thoughts on 'Judgment Day', posted earlier!
Doh! Okay, I will search. I'm attempting to do twenty or so things at once...
Love and music and triads. Well, Cav, Aaron Stark would appreciate your compression, as do I.
Kelly, one of the things that I just caught in your book was the brief prelude:
"Because I cannot paint" What a great title for a new poem.
I can't dance, either, Ms. Letty :-)
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