askchester
 
Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 07:31 pm
birds tattoo the bleeding sun
clocks wind down to
the equilibrium of colors

a relationship of gazes
something clever hangs in the air
screaming for attention

but still detached
the sunset steals my vision
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 7 Dec, 2004 05:31 am
You should combine your last three in a wonderous buffet! Well written!
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Reply Tue 7 Dec, 2004 05:46 pm
thank you
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