Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 07:30 pm
neither writing nor reading
would assuage my inablity
to attach my thoughts
to this shifting veneer
of half lifes and impossibilities

almost static;
like blood and honey
these words crawl.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 7 Dec, 2004 05:30 am
Deep again - nice
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Reply Tue 7 Dec, 2004 05:47 pm
thank you
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