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God Loves Santa Clause

 
 
Reply Sat 4 Dec, 2004 02:25 am
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 03:49 am
I think this poem has potential. It seems a little forced in its metrics, but could be a winner with some work.
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truemale
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 06:42 am
Ah my....Kelly, Kelly, Kelly...my #1 fan....

(I type the above with a grin on my face....)

Yea, I agree it was forced only because I wanted something to do while waiting for the little lady to get ready to go to market last year just before Christmas.....*smile*...

PBWY

tm
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 06:44 am
hehe, well there then :-)
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truemale
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 10:28 am
So my lady is the blame for my forcing the rhyme of the poem??? Whew...I'm off the hook!!!

(*smile*)

tm
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