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T. G. I. F.

 
 
Reply Sat 4 Dec, 2004 02:18 am
Thank God it's Friday. It's been a long hard week.
Let me sing for joy, no time now to be meek.

Weekly sweat drains me so much, all for the sake of the dollar.
No time to think of my love and it makes me want to holler!

All weekend long, all the day, nighttime too, I love my honey.
You couldn't tear me away from that, for the world or money.

Time to dance and sing or just being couch potatoes together.
The life of kings is poorer compared to what we can weather.

But I hold tight & carry on, never meant to live for free,
And I thank God it's Friday, ?'cause my honey waits for me!
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roger
 
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Reply Sat 4 Dec, 2004 02:42 am
Not much of a critic, but I loved this one. I guess I'll have to check out some of your other stuff.

<just from the title, i came up with another comment, but refrained after reading this>
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truemale
 
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Reply Sat 4 Dec, 2004 04:56 am
thank you, Roger

By the by...you're not one of "those" who 'read a book by it's cover', are you?

(Just joking around...Have a great weekend)

tm
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 03:56 am
You are on a bit of a roll with these, TM. Dollar/Holler grates me a bit. Again, another one with a great premise.
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truemale
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 06:35 am
Thank you, Kelly.

"Dollar/Holler" -> Why doth it perplex thy soul by grating it?

PBWY

tm
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 06:39 am
It wasn't a scientific statement, but rather one which reflected my feeling at the time of reading. Not even a criticism :-)
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truemale
 
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Reply Mon 6 Dec, 2004 10:25 am
Oh..Affected you that way, huh?
Interesting...

PBWY

tm
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