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Tue 30 Nov, 2004 07:35 pm
I just want you to know that i'll never be there.
Through thick and thin like when I used to care.
I will never hold you higher then I hold myself.
And I will never put my trust upon your shelf.
You have let me down time and time a-gain.
And I let you abuse me until I went insane.
You have taken everything I am for granted.
But now I am no longer distracted.
I see through your manipulative eyes.
No longer will you feed off my cries.
I stand up to you and I stand over you.
Now you can see what i've been through.
So when you're hurting, no one will care.
And I just want you to know, that I will never be there.
I think you're getting better
I agree with Stuh. Every new poem brings more of your talent. Keep them coming!
Stuh: post some more - haven't heard from you in awhile!
Yes, very good. You do indeed continue to improve. I'm looking forward to more!
I loved it, absolutely loved it. It made me feel just like how I felt when I found out my X was cheating on me. I felt as though I had been betrayed and mistrusted. But never again!! So, on a lighter note it was excellent! BUWAHAAHAHAH
Thank you, kelly, cav, and tear!
I think we can all relate to this one...one way or another.
Nice writing!
Thanks vex, for some reason I didn't see your post.....I like your writing aswell!