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I just want you to know.

 
 
Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 07:35 pm
I just want you to know that i'll never be there.
Through thick and thin like when I used to care.
I will never hold you higher then I hold myself.
And I will never put my trust upon your shelf.

You have let me down time and time a-gain.
And I let you abuse me until I went insane.
You have taken everything I am for granted.
But now I am no longer distracted.

I see through your manipulative eyes.
No longer will you feed off my cries.
I stand up to you and I stand over you.
Now you can see what i've been through.

So when you're hurting, no one will care.
And I just want you to know, that I will never be there.
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stuh505
 
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Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 09:23 pm
I think you're getting better Smile
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 09:25 pm
Thanks stuh, means alot.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 07:00 am
I agree with Stuh. Every new poem brings more of your talent. Keep them coming!

Stuh: post some more - haven't heard from you in awhile!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 07:27 am
Yes, very good. You do indeed continue to improve. I'm looking forward to more!
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tear jerked punk
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 12:33 pm
I loved it, absolutely loved it. It made me feel just like how I felt when I found out my X was cheating on me. I felt as though I had been betrayed and mistrusted. But never again!! So, on a lighter note it was excellent! BUWAHAAHAHAH
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 05:56 pm
Thank you, kelly, cav, and tear!
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Brand X
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 05:57 pm
I think we can all relate to this one...one way or another.

Nice writing!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Thu 2 Dec, 2004 02:15 pm
Thanks brank x!
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Vex86
 
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Reply Fri 3 Dec, 2004 01:02 am
nicely writen i like it
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 5 Dec, 2004 02:40 pm
Thanks vex, for some reason I didn't see your post.....I like your writing aswell!
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