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Tue 30 Nov, 2004 06:53 pm
In the shadows I saw you
timid and shy were you
together our futures would mesh
if only you would be true
I heard you scream no
to the question of life with me
But in your whispers i heard yes
i heard you scream go away
when i stayed by you side
but in your whispers i heard stay
I heard you scream die
when i asked for your love
but what you didnt know
is died with every little scream
each more with every whisper
for you torn at my soul
with your indecision
Ah, the gut wrenching fun of rejection and indecision....
Nice depiction of the awkwardness of a new encounter...the intrigue and uncertainty intertwined.
At least that's how I read it, nice!
Smart and well-scripted, seed. Tidy up a bit and submit this one!