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Tue 30 Nov, 2004 06:03 pm
Standing dreamers that was us,
Five little faces
Making our claim,
Toy shop window,
Alandins cave,
Thats what santas bring me,
This I pray,
Cowboy suit and gun,
Shivering in the cold air,
Window glow,
Warm delight,
Mother calls,
Its getting late,
One more look,
Before I go,
But that Christmas,
I won't forget,
Santa made me,
A space cadet,
Next year maybe out west,
Me and my space suit,
Over the moon.
I love this piece, Joe. Perfect and perfectly you. Wouldn't change a thing here, except for capitalizing 'I' for consistency (or making it small for the same reason). Well done!
thanks Kellyvinal, see what you mean with the letter I thanks so much for your comments.
This is a sweet memory, joel, and a wonderful way you have expressed it. I smiled.
thanks A-Glow, sweet memories
cool poem, kinda space spiff reminiscent
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