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Fool That I Am (song)

 
 
Brand X
 
Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 09:47 am
Don't take me; For the fool I am
Because I know you know
You can get away with anything
You want, with me

Don't bend me; Or change who I am
Because I know you know
You can change me to anything
You want, of me

Don't break me; I'm fragile I am
And I know you know
How to take me down and break me
To pieces, so easy

If I die trying
Or we live crying
If we rust away as we're both denying
If we try a little harder; trade our souls with no barter
Breathe a little deeper; become a little stronger
Just take me
Just take me

Don't make me; Believe in you
Because I know I know
How I want to want you too
You're so, untrue

Don't fake me; I know who you are
And I know you know
We've come too far and learned
These things, of ourselves

So take me; The fool that I am
And I know you know
I'm just scared so you weaken me
With no, rebound

If I die trying
Or we live crying
If we rust away as we're both denying
If we try a little harder; trade our souls with no barter
Breathe a little deeper; become a little stronger
Just take me
Just take me
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 04:49 pm
Awesome...I really love this.....I wish I could hear it, it would make a great song.
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Brand X
 
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Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 05:27 pm
stand up for pessimism wrote:
Awesome...I really love this.....I wish I could hear it, it would make a great song.


Thanks!

I write as I play it on guitar so music and all song elements are finished.

Enjoy your writings too!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 05:33 pm
Thanks!

What kind of song is it.....slow, fast? I play guitar too...Maybe we can get together...lol...
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Brand X
 
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Reply Tue 30 Nov, 2004 05:41 pm
stand up for pessimism wrote:
Thanks!

What kind of song is it.....slow, fast? I play guitar too...Maybe we can get together...lol...


It's slowish with capo on 3rd fret. I love A minor stuff.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 06:47 am
Brand X, the imagry is absoutely awesome. We must hear this when you set it to music!
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