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Islands...

 
 
stuh505
 
Reply Mon 29 Nov, 2004 10:51 pm
Tried to lie under the rising sun,
but the sky grew too blue
for me and you.
We came too soon--
island hopping through long waters
we were not meant to sail.
Youthul hands gripped the rudder
for years, to no avail.
And only when we let go,
did the current take us home.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 07:01 am
There's one! I take it back! Very nice, Stuh! Great to see you back in force!
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stuh505
 
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 09:50 am
Thanks kelly. I'm not gone, just lazy Smile
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