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Mon 29 Nov, 2004 09:01 pm
We Are The Sane Ones
Everyone is reaching out for something to hold on to,
Afraid of falling away from this Emotion,
That everyone supposedly experiences.
What about those that know it only ends?
What about those that feel it's not worth the effort,
when everyone just dies in the end?
Why are we the ones that are fucked,
When we're only being logical?
Why are we the ones in the mental hospitals,
When we just know that love ends as quickly as it begins?
Kristin, as I always say, it touched me so, like a preacher at a playground! Well, it's awesome, I wish you would have let me read it before today!!! Well I loved it and i'm gonna read your others. Cheerio mate!
There is depth to this poem, but I think you should revise it a little with allusion. Inferences...
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