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Mon 29 Nov, 2004 02:51 pm
I'm someone who wounders alot,
But is only lost in thought.
Trying to find answers to questions,
By looking in the past at faded memories,
Of someone he use to be.
Someone who hopes to one day have,
a normal life maybe have someone to,
talk to every once in awhile.
Someone who has put in time inside,
His own personal hell only to come out,
Stronger and wiser than before.
Someone who still wants to,
trust in another love another.
Has yet to give up hope in others.
Someone who lives life form,
The heart while trying not to be torn apart.
Can't seem to grasp his place in the scheme of thing.
Someone who can't understand,
Why someone would hurt they're fellow man.
Someone who is just lost in thought tryin to make sense of it all
good piece of writing, it reminded me so much of my girlfriend, in how she feels at times. She calls herself the new me she says she's gave up on the her. Must tell her to read this.
Vex,
Another wonderful piece of your feelings that you have been going through lately. The anger seems dispelled but left in its place is a whole lot of questions, looking back and looking forward both at the same time. Where there is hope, there will be light. The aftermath of anything is hard to sort through. I'm happy to know you are giving yourself the gift of time, even in this somewhat melancholy period. It's a part of the healing. Like a broken bone, a heart must too be given time to mend in order to be as strong, if not stronger than before There is new wisdom in you now, whether you can see it yet or not.
I thank you both
and Lady J i don't think its a good idea to say a 18year old has wisdom
because they seldom do have any (even this one)
Vex86 wrote:I thank you both
and Lady J i don't think its a good idea to say a 18year old has wisdom
because they seldom do have any (even this one)
You may not see it for another 30 or 40 years. But it's in there and one day you will draw upon it. It's like the tender young sapling, one day to grow into the mighty oak.
Vex, I love the way you express yourself here. Raw and natural. Tidy up the grammar (i.e. Someone who) and you are ready for prime time!
I enjoyed the sense of hope through adversity here Vex.
its only through adversity that one finds out who they truely are
and thanks for the coments as always
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