Reply Mon 29 Nov, 2004 03:41 am
i see you everyday
always pretending
i hear everyone say
you are everything

they dont know
what lurks inside
the monster beneath
you try to hide

you used to be good
you used to be free
but now your gone
and no longer happy

i dont understand
why you cant be true
just to be in the crowd
you erase the real you

i used to like you
you used to be my friend
but now youve changed
this is the end

im sorry for you
and i miss being your friend
now your friend i know arent true
ous was 100%
Rolling Eyes
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Reply Wed 1 Dec, 2004 06:32 am
love lost, frienship lost, soul lost. Powerful and raw. Very precious!
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