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He looked at me with rheumy eyes

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 10:49 am
That long ago had silent tears,
In his well worn moving cart.
A small can hung and rusted near,
Whose printing spoke,
Please help a Vet.

One small moment,
We had met.

I asked him which operation.
The Pacific, he barely spoke.

I did not put the money in
His sad and lonesome cup of tin.
The man who ran the store was
Impatient.

He made his way into the street,
I watched him as he wheeled away.
And thought of all I meant to say.

"Nothing gold can stay"
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Lady J
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 11:50 am
Letty,

You never cease to amaze me how you can take a very simple every day occurence that most of us would just forget about and weave it into a beautiful tapestry.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 11:53 am
Puts me in mind of Leonard Cohen's lyric:

A bunch of lonesome and very quarrelsome heroes
were smoking out along the open road;
the night was very dark and thick between them,
each man beneath his ordinary load.
'I'd like to tell my story,'
said one of them so young and bold,
'I'd like to tell my story,
before I turn into gold.'
But no one really could hear him,
the night so dark and thick and green;
well I guess that these heroes must always live there
where you and I have only been.
Put out your cigarette, my love,
you've been alone too long;
and some of us are very hungry now
to hear what it is you've done that was so wrong.

I sing this for the crickets,
I sing this for the army,
I sing this for your children
and for all who do not need me.
'I'd like to tell my story,'
said one of them so bold,
'Oh yes, I'd like to tell my story
'cause you know I feel I'm turning into gold.'
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 11:54 am
Thank you, Lady J. It's the small things in life that catch my eye. I couldn't get over that man, a WWII veteran and reduced to being ignored.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 11:59 am
Poetry and music and art, all part of the same gold threads. I liked that song, edgar, but I have never heard it.

When I came home after doing some last minute shopping, I was suddenly a bit ashamed of all the food that filled my cupboard. The man bought a lottery ticket. Damn, I hope he wins, but he won't.
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Lady J
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 12:01 pm
Letty wrote:
Thank you, Lady J. It's the small things in life that catch my eye. I couldn't get over that man, a WWII veteran and reduced to being ignored.


At one point, somebody's child, hopefully loved.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 12:14 pm
Lady J. Everything reminds me of a song. When I was a kid, we used to make fun of the obvious "hill billy" music. I've learned now to appreciate it all.








Hank Williams Lyrics - The Tramp on the Street

The Tramp on the Street Lyrics:
Recorded by: hank williams, sr.
Writers: grady and hazel cole capo: 1st fret/key: eb/play: d

[d] only a tramp was lazarus sad [g] fate
He who lay do-[a7] wn at the rich man's [d] gate
He begged for the crumbs from the rich man to [g] eat
He was only a [d] tramp found [a7] dead on the [d] street. [d] he was some mother's darlin', he was some mother's [g] son
Once he was [a7] fair and once he was [d] young
And some mother rocked him, her darlin' to [g] sleep
But they left him to [d] die like a [a7] tramp on the [d] street. jesus, he died on calvary's tree
He shed his life's blood for you and for me
They pierced his side and then his feet
And they left him to die like a tramp on the street. he was mary's own darlin', he was god's chosen son
Once he was fair and once he was young
Mary, she rocked him, her darlin' to sleep
But they left him to die like a tramp on the street. if jesus should come and knock on your door
For a place to come in, or bread from your store
Would you welcome him in, or turn him away
Then the god's would deny you on the great judgement day.

Dear Hank. He died rather young himself. If you play guitar, you can do the chords. <smile>

Hey, I can play that on piano.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 12:49 pm
and, of course, Frost's poem that is so very ironic:

a poem by Robert Frost



NOTHING GOLD CAN STAY

Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay.



If I could post a painting, it would NOT be Joan Miro. Razz
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 12:51 pm
I thought this was wonderfully penned Letty.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 12:56 pm
Hey, Cav. Many thanks. Saw your response on Kitchen Pete's thread. You know an awful lot of songs for such a young chef.

Looked out my kitchen window and saw a white heron standing in my ground cover.

I thought of Miss Otis Egrets. Smile
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 01:03 pm
Herons are beautiful birds. I once had the rare oppurtunity to see a Whooping Crane, live and in person when I was a lad.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 01:16 pm
and I understand that loons are endangered as well as the whooping crane. I have never seen either, but I did see two lovely pink flamingoes
in awkward but a graceful flight
Against the juxtaposed of night
Just over the rim of rising tide
And matching setting sun.

And just yesterday,
The geese of Canada
Flew South,
But they were not in V formation,
Wings akimbo
Radar rationed.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 01:24 pm
I have seen many loons. They are beautiful birds, and their call is absolutely haunting.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 01:25 pm
We Canajuns don't hold Canada Geese in such high esteem as 'Mericans though. They are mean creatures, and poo machines.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 01:29 pm
Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 01:39 pm
Wonderful piece, Ms Letty. I particularly enjoyed the subtle interplay of the lines :-)
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 25 Nov, 2004 01:52 pm
Ah, Kelly, my Vapours friend. Thank you, honey. I have often wondered what it would be like to be a cast off, especially when one has given so much.

Sorta like hand me down clothes. Hope your sweet Kelly Ann never has to suffer that indignity.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 26 Nov, 2004 04:16 am
Highly unlikely :-)
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