Vex86
 
Reply Tue 23 Nov, 2004 01:59 pm
Today is a new day.
A new day with rain.
This rain is special tho.
For it is a rain of change.

There is no pain or,
Fear with in this rain.
Instead it cleanness the soul,
Waters the seeds of hope,
So the flowers of joy can grow.

This rain is a good rain.
May it bring much needed change,
And renew hope of old.
May it restore faith to,
Those that needed it the most.

So drink of the blessed rain,
For these rains are few...
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 23 Nov, 2004 05:53 pm
That's a very nice poem vex! Very optimistic!
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Vex86
 
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Reply Tue 23 Nov, 2004 09:41 pm
thank you
good mood = something alil more up beat Smile
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 24 Nov, 2004 06:00 am
And it all brings life! Excellent piece, Vex! Excellent!
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