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Lost in my Imagination

 
 
Reply Mon 22 Nov, 2004 03:12 am
Fingers dance across the keyboard

In tune with the sounds of

Letters becoming words

Words forming images in my mind

Figures of my imagination

A girl with bows in her hair

Singing songs of gladness

Stumbles into the shadows

Unable to find her way

The path to complex to follow

She cries for fear of falling

Farther away from reality

Lost in my imagination
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Rainbow Leprechauns
 
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Reply Mon 22 Nov, 2004 11:08 am
wtf, no one's commented on this?

Maybe it hasn't been up that long, i dunno, i didnt check >_o

I love it.

I'm tired so I can't explain why I dig it, it's just spiffy. Woot.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 22 Nov, 2004 12:24 pm
Well done poem, indecisive! I love the dreaminess of what swirls arount those keys of yours! I hope to be reading more like this very soon!
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