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waiting, longing, wishing..

 
 
Reply Mon 22 Nov, 2004 03:12 am
I begin each day waiting for tomorrow,

I end each day longing for today.

Never content or satisfied,

Always wanting what I cannot have.

Yet even when it's possible

I refuse it

Stubborn, afraid, so unsure

Like a desolate flower,

Not yet in bloom

Awaiting the time

When I can face reality

Except certainty

Open my petals

To the suns bright rays

Unafraid of the shadows

All the while

Wishing for yesterday
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Rainbow Leprechauns
 
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Reply Mon 22 Nov, 2004 11:10 am
man, sometimes thats exactly how i feel.

you're a spiffy freakin' writer, man. Hooray to you.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 22 Nov, 2004 12:17 pm
Like the flower to which you allude, your poem is a blossoming work of beauty, my friend. A pleasure to the eye and soul :-)
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