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Inside out

 
 
Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2003 04:22 pm
Inside out

Your love turned my existence inside out.
How did you do it? I'm still amazed.

For almost 30 years, you saw in me what I did not.
What is it within me that perpetually you have gazed?

Showing me an inner truth, one thing led to another.
Then one day it hit me - an awareness like no other.

The outer truth came in, and the inner truth went out.
Through the years, I existed momentarily, of this there was no doubt.

Others may need two worlds to collide to knock over their unknown pride,
What you have done to me, simply wink your eye, and my existence would have died.

The fragile strength of your love is stronger than all life's forces could even dream of.
Supposed or real, all pretend to link your name by word not deeds of love.

Who says fault cannot be found by trying to seek your face?
But HOW one tries - that truly wins the race.
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Reply Fri 14 Feb, 2003 01:46 pm
I Like it Truemale
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truemale
 
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Reply Fri 14 Feb, 2003 06:45 pm
Thank you, Jackie.
Peace be with you.
T.
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