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Sat 20 Nov, 2004 11:17 pm
Yeah, I had one more poem, but I think it's too sexual, now that I read over it again. Not like, nasty pig lovin', just... Well, yeah. Oh well, three or four poems is enough from me.
But hey I could show the first few lines of the poem before it gets too lovey.
Have you ever fallen deeply, madly, hopelessly in love?
Well, I can help you with that.
Embrace the careless spontaneity that flows so easily when your heart is racing,
In the arms of the only one that can truly make you cry,
The only one that can make you truly believe in Happily Ever After.
Hey, Rainbow. Welcome to A2K.
Frankly, I like the lines of the poem that you have created. To me, a poem should suggest and not necessarily be explicit. There is much more allure in poetry when you use the right diction, to conjure the right idea.
Well put, letty. Welcome, RL, by the way! I would love to read more of your poetry! Don't force it, please serve it here when it is ready!
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