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Sat 20 Nov, 2004 10:57 pm
It's surprising I wrote this, I guess I just stuffed it back after I wrote it? In a hurry I guess. But I know it's mine, cuz I remember who it's about. Old poem.
Salvation, anyone?
When everything is fast and blurry, twisting, turning, constant hurry.
I can't breathe, it's overwhelming, Dizzy Spells, If I faint, catch me.
I can't walk straight, I can't concentrate, I reach out and find nothing.
Alone is an understatement when you hear your footsteps on the pavement,
and that's all you hear. For miles and miles. It's all you get here.
If I faint, catch me. If I fall, appear to me, and make things stop spinning.
I know I'm alone... I know that I'm lost... I'm calling your name, and only hearing echoes.
Please, please, catch me, appear to me, make things stop spinning.
Excellent! This I like! Can't explain how I feel about it, I like it!
Pessy, this girl's got a knack for poetry! Keep it up rainbow!
aaaw, thankya, tear_jerked, ill get around to reading your stuff after I post my last one for tonight. ^_^
Thanks, other person. Lol, i forgot to look at your screen name before I clicked to post... I think I saw someone call you Pessy?
Anyway, thanks, heheh.
Yes, "pessy" is the name I have adopted here on a2k!
I like the vertigo feel of this! Very interesting piece!
thats wonderful it gets to a personal level with me
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