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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 02:15 pm
Contrary
To the thoughts I cradled
In past hours
Comes fresh inspiration
News that empowers

Within the will of taking
Lies my prayer
Unbound by disbelief
And disregarding
Who might care.

From dismal days
I'm pulled apart- and start
To run
For all the momentous
Achievement
Quite done- but hidden
(inside the heart)

Put down
The shreds of years now gone
Delay the thinking of a time
Unneeded
Grin
And have a purpose
That will not be impeded

So far from high
Ingrained in low
Marching to the tune a wicked piped
Come now
To break the branch of mem' ry
And bereft of wind-blown hype

A Thank-You bellowed shrill
And wide smile
Faces to the heavens-
Sky
O give me
GIVE ME
All my meek and shy and let me
In light and shadow
Serve only THEE
I cry.


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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 02:40 pm
A poem that sings a ballad of hope. Most excellent, theol!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 03:01 pm
Beautiful tol, beautiful! You don't post your work often, but when you do, it's the greatest!

"pessy"
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 03:08 pm
Ah, theo. As always a courageous and lovely paean. I love the way your avatar and your poem has a face looking upward.
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theollady
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 08:59 pm
Thank you kind friends. Your expressions are deeply encouraging.

I appreciate your notice of looking upward, Letty. This is the way I BEGAN, Smile Smile -

this one is 'sweet sixteen' and a tiny bit chubby. Smile

But that was a LONG TIME ago. Smile . This past week my family graced me with a BIG red-trimmed cake (my favorite color, mostly) and lit it up for my 68 years. then they told me I looked only 40 something... boy, what a crowd!! Very Happy
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 09:12 pm
It was your b-day theo?....Well, if only we had all known! Happy belated birthday theollady!
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theollady
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 09:15 pm
Thank you Pessy. They are too numerous to keep up with, and frankly-
I am too old to TELL. HAHAHAHAHAHA Laughing
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