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Hey why they lock it?!

 
 
Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 07:23 am
Why is it locked?!
We'll start it agen then!

steads doin the spittin, theres no dressin rooms for fittin
seein if u can fit it as a rapper star
Uv gone to far, like neptune n the stars
n now im comin in as fast as an F1 car
Battlin now im ready, its time me for Steady
to come out n show y'all i aint soft like u teddies
and ur damn dogs called"freddie"
wot the hell is with u buck joe?
ur rhymes r **** n the pace is slow
buck er roo home to find a toy and play dough
cos thats were u belong playin wid toys so GO!
A couple of u hav tite rhymes,
i aint gunna diss ya cos im findin them aight
but y'all join me wen i say we need to"giv him the light"
but it aint nuthin personall plz im begging u dnt rite bk n fite
cos ur rhymes piss me off, n put rappers to shame
its like listenin to some novice in an arcticle in"daily shame"
your rhymes leave me in pain, feelin nothin but lame, copied from others all the SAME!
not leavin in pain cos ur words r like knifes, ur blunt.. but no straight to the point
NOw IMA be straight to the point... Shut the **** up.. go bk smoke ur fake Joint!
Smile
Holla!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 12:25 pm
This must be a rap?
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 01:55 pm
Neverending Rap Thread is here--featured:

http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=33349

Edit (Moderator): Please use only the following thread for Rap Battles:

http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=897477#897477
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