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So It Goes

 
 
Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:22 am
So it goes, so it goes,
chills the toes sometimes,
poetry or prose?

Let the pen trip
across rhythmic Elysian fields,
or let it yield to a brood
of gigantic mass?

Pen-brow furrowed,
eraser wearing down,
the nib has found the block,
uncarved.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:38 am
Nice, Cav. If most poetry were a pork chop, I'd call this a glazed ham.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:44 am
<using Homer voice> Mmmm...glazed ham....
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:45 am
A poke chop san'wich for you, young man!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:04 pm
I have some fine rabbit in the fridge for me, with double-smoked bacon, mushrooms, and a sour cream sauce. Smile
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:06 pm
Two pieces of rye and (as we so eloquently say in the Army) you're good to go!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:14 pm
Man, it was a giant rabbit. 4 lbs. + Lots of leftovers, including the entire saddle.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:37 pm
Your American friends to the south like their wabbit supersized, my friend :-) Want a coke and chips to go with that?
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:50 pm
No thanks, I'm diabetic. Wink A diet coke and baked, not fried chips maybe.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:55 pm
Well then, we'll just add lettuce to that feast and fix you right up!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 01:22 pm
Ahh lettuce. Lettuce praise the leaf, the wheat sheaf, and being brief.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 01:45 pm
Just hold the beef.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 01:46 pm
No..that would be torture...I love a good steak.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 03:09 am
Hmmmmm
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 11:51 am
Kelly and Cav, You two are hilarious.

I think this is Cav's surrealist period.

I do want to read it one more time,
With a tiny hint of garlic and some rhyme.

While I'm superannuating,
And slightly overstating
It's the rabbit's season mating
And I sure am calculating
How to stop the infiltrating
In my kine.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 12:24 pm
Stop, Letty! You are making me hungry!
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 12:28 pm
Very Happy

Someone in the poetry forum posted a poem by Germaine Williams. Really interesting to try and explicate. Yawl take a look when you have the tyme. opps!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 01:02 pm
Letty wrote:
Kelly and Cav, You two are hilarious.

I think this is Cav's surrealist period.

I do want to read it one more time,
With a tiny hint of garlic and some rhyme.

While I'm superannuating,
And slightly overstating
It's the rabbit's season mating
And I sure am calculating
How to stop the infiltrating
In my kine.


From the sublime to the profane, a period for me would indeed be surreal.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 01:31 pm
.<period>.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 03:20 pm
Dang Lettty, where be the link to Germaine?
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