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The Dancing Fools

 
 
bellavu
 
Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 11:59 pm
In a sea of confusion, lost in this time
Searching for wisdom to the beat of my rhyme
In sunshine or rain we are dancing like fools
Watching you rush to your courtship of duels
Look to me and I'll remind you to be free
At the most at the least act fool heartedly
Through our courtyard of green
We will dance and be seen
As you stumble or soar to your destiny
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:56 am
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For one, I like the scheme. The actual message is too nebulous to understand without further context, but it is formatted well!
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