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You rose above them.......................

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Letty
 
Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 09:04 pm
I hid among them
And find that I am still that child.
When the leaves fall,
One by one,
I am naked
And can no longer
Secret myself.

No shelter from the palms
With shedding fronds
And wounded base
No trace............

From Letty with love.
Adieu
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 09:19 pm
what do this adieu mean?


Seriously, a thoughtful and beautiful poem, letty. - so vulnerable
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 09:39 pm
edgar, adieu means goodnight; au revoir means goodbye.

Yes, my friend..........................

vulnerable.

and thank you, edgar
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 10:12 pm
adieu, letty.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:52 am
Fragile, like a leaf from this grand month on an oak in Virginia. Wonderful, Ms. Letty!
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 07:38 am
Hey, Kelly. Glad you liked my fragility. There is something about the night, no? Thanks, my friend.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:15 am
There is indeed something about the night :-)
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the prince
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:19 am
kellyvinal wrote:
There is indeed something about the night :-)


Night
acheronian, solitary,
intimidating, creeping, terrifying,
everywhere, black, silent, unknown,
daunting, horrifying, everlasting,
transcendent, unexplored,
Night
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:36 am
Ahhhhh :-) Gautam hath spoken.
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 11:59 am
Wow, gautam. Fantastic. I wondered how long it would be before I would see the Rajah in verse.

Kelly, gautam is a prince of a fellow, no?
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:02 pm
I do enjoy his words, Ms. Letty :-)
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