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One rut to another!

 
 
Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 06:13 pm
Remember how you felt
after you left that relationship
that only dragged you down?
Remember how free
and alive you felt?
Remember how you wished
you had only done it sooner?

Remember?
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Eva
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 07:17 pm
Yes. I remember driving around town with all the windows down and the radio and full volume, singing at the top of my lungs.

For six months.
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stuh505
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 07:22 pm
I had to read this three times to figure out what you meant by drug.

I'll be honest, I don't think this is much of a poem SUFP....it looks more like you writing down your thoughts. But I think it has potential.
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Eva
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 07:26 pm
The correct word is actually "dragged."
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 10:08 pm
Yes..thanks eva...I wasn't sure!

Stuh- THis really isn't a poem, you're right. It's what I call self counseling. Not only to I use a2k for sharing my stuff, I also use it as a place to store things, like a diary, but only others can read it. Thats more so what the point of this was. Thanks for your input!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 10:09 pm
Eva wrote:
Yes. I remember driving around town with all the windows down and the radio and full volume, singing at the top of my lungs.

For six months.


I did almost those same things at one time......I never though I would ever feel so good!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:51 am
Excellent poll of emotion, Pessimist. Socratic poetry - I like :-)
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