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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 05:39 pm
For once, some one understands me.
You see the world as I see.
We are hard, but we do break.
we are happy, at a different rate.

I've never laughed so much
with anyone as I do with you.
I never cared about anything
until I met you.

For so long, I was contained
to my own head.
If anyone else knew me,
my life I would dread.

But you set me free
when we're together.
I hope you will love me,
forever, and ever.

Thank you.
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 05:46 pm
Kind of light and airy for you, isn't it, standup?

Where's the angst?
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 05:48 pm
I know....it is weird isn't it! I thought I'd try something new while I was in a good mood....lol....perhaps the angst will come later....when I find out that it really wans't all that good, and I made a complete idiot of myself....lol.....hopefully that doesn't happen....hehe
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 05:55 pm
Well, you didn't make an idiot of yourself, if that's any consolation.

Just seemed a bit out of character, is all.

I was worried about you.

I thought manybe you had escaped the dance of Satan.
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 05:55 pm
"...We are happy at a different rate...."

serif, Stand Up!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 06:14 pm
Thanks gus, and no, I have not escaped....lol

Letty-Thanks! (I think)...hehe....or? What does that mean?
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 06:19 pm
<smile> Loosely translated, StandUp. It simply means "a fine line"..well, my goodness. Gus used angst, I thought I would try and top his vocab.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 06:34 pm
Okie dokie :wink:
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Seed
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 09:37 pm
splendid... i like it mucho... and You're Welcome Smile hehehe
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 09:38 pm
Hehe...yeah...lol
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 11:10 pm
He has been... De-pessimized...
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smog
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 01:21 am
Do I see some intrigue and excitement in the Original Writing forum??
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Rainbow Leprechauns
 
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Reply Sat 20 Nov, 2004 11:31 pm
Aaaaaw, I totally dig this, It's all cute and awesome-yay. You're awesome at writing dood
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