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Through different eyes

 
 
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2004 07:00 pm
I'm just trying to make something out of this, either i'm not feeling the right emotions or i'm just trying to force something that isn't there. I'm posting this anyway so I can fix it as I feel it. Thanks for reading!



If I can't see the sunshine
through all the clouds and rain
Then I don't understand you
because I don't feel the same.

You know I look around
and see nothing but hate.
You've tried to teach me love
but it's way too late.

You see people laughing
and having a great time.
I see that they're hiding
what they cannot leave behind.
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theollady
 
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Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2004 08:10 pm
I relate to these words, Stand up for pessimism!

Well written, and continue with it. There is much more to feel as well as to inform.

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You know I look around
and see nothing but hate.
You've tried to teach me love
but it's way too late.


A wise person said, you cannot drink sweet and bitter water at the same fountain...

This is very wise verse, Sufp.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2004 08:14 pm
Thank you tol, thank you very much!

So who was the wise person?
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Seed
 
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Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2004 09:18 pm
i connect to this poem... i have tried to teach someone love yet it backfired and I ended hating them....
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theollady
 
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Reply Mon 15 Nov, 2004 08:09 am
James, a disciple of Jesus Christ said that.

King James V. James 3:11
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 15 Nov, 2004 09:21 am
This is a bridge to a larger piece. Let us have it, pessimist! LET US HAVE IT ALL!!!
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