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But I would know you anyway

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 08:23 pm
If only the time would reverse,
I would know you.

If only the better weren't worse,
I would know you.

If only the weave were a thread,
I would know you.

If only the soul could be fed,
I would know you

But I would know you anyway.

If only the light were the dark,
I would know you.

If only my sight weren't a curse,
I would know you.

If only the way would be denser,
I would know you.

If only the mood could be tenser,
I would know you.


But I would know you anyway.
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Craven de Kere
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 08:24 pm
Who?
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 08:28 pm
someone I love, Craven
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Craven de Kere
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 08:33 pm
Mystery woman!
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 08:38 pm
No, my young friend. There is no mystery to me, as you well know. Smile

Perhaps one might call this poem--spontaneous combustion
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dyslexia
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 08:39 pm
"love is no way to treat a friend"
very strong images you have there letty
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 08:47 pm
Yes, dyslexia. They are strong because they are mine. and if I conjured up one image for you, that will be my "thank you".
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Gelisgesti
 
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Reply Sat 8 Feb, 2003 09:30 am
You gonna eat the rest of that cinnamon roll?
Love your poem
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 8 Feb, 2003 11:04 am
Shocked Well, will you look at this! Ge, upon my word it's good to see you . Hmmmmm. Coming from you, that's quite a coup. Thanks.

and you keep your hands off my "role".... Laughing
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oldandknew
 
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Reply Sat 8 Feb, 2003 02:01 pm
Hi Letty, does the "someone" love you in return tho
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 8 Feb, 2003 02:07 pm
Oak, Everybody loves a lover, I'm a lover ..everybody loves me. Very Happy

and for my second number:

Somebody loves me I wonder who,
I wonder who it could be.............

Who sang that song, anyway? Smile
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Gelisgesti
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 05:56 am
YOOOHOO Letty ..... going out for eggamuffins ... want one? ;o))
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Letty
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 06:01 am
Hey, Ge,

Think I'll pass. Seems that I have enough egg on my face already. Laughing
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Gelisgesti
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 06:10 am
Huh??
Getting the jump on easter ??
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Letty
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 06:19 am
Ok, Ge.
No more Ms Esoteric. Jump on Easter? Nah...jump start with a cuppa java. Today is sufficient unto itself. Besides that: "Spring can Really Hang You Up the Most" . Rolling Eyes
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Gelisgesti
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 06:41 am
Why so glum chum ..... or should I just shut up?
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Letty
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 08:28 am
Ah, Ge.
I'm not glum. Just waxing musical and poetic. I gotta visit your poetry corner. Smile
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jjorge
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 09:58 am
A lovely, poignant poem.
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Letty
 
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Reply Wed 12 Feb, 2003 10:11 am
jjorge, Your encouragement has made me believe that I'm a real, live poet. Smile
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