when i get lonely and i cannot sleep
i put my fuzzy slippers on my feet
sometimes it works yeah
but sometimes not
depending on the kind of
loneliness i got...
(actually it's a happy song. By Joe Williams|
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kickycan
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 09:52 pm
I want to write.
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colorbook
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 09:53 pm
kickycan wrote:
I want to write.
Write what?
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kickycan
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 09:53 pm
I mean, I want to do some more writing on my horror novel that will never ever be published but that I still think might turn into something as good as any of these hack-ass bullshit writers out there making bundles of money for their unoriginal garbage.
Yeah, that's it.
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colorbook
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 09:57 pm
Well, you are very good at using sexual dialogÂ…that always seems to add pizzazz to a novel.
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kickycan
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 09:59 pm
Actually, this story starts out with a sex scene. I felt like that would be a good way to rope people in. Maybe it ain't the most original idea in the world, but sometimes you gotta go with what works.
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colorbook
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 10:02 pm
Nothing wrong with a sex scene at the beginning... from you, it would be expected.
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kickycan
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 10:05 pm
Hehehe...okay, I think I'm going to see what I can do with this story...keep up the bunny posts, everyone!
Here's one from me to you.
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dlowan
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 10:21 pm
THAT is not a bunny.
It is a travesty.
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colorbook
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 10:27 pm
This kind of bunnies?
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Green Witch
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Wed 21 Sep, 2005 10:27 pm
Lucifer wrote:
If you're still bored, you can join in with me and attach bunnies to this thread...until it reaches Australia.
No more bunnies for Australia, they are very bad for the environment.
Kicky, why not serialize your novel here? We can critique it and you will be guaranteed a very long thread.
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Lucifer
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 08:03 am
Okay, so if you don't want to stop at Australia, why don't we stop at...outer space? Or is that too far away?
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devriesj
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 08:13 am
To the moon, Alice!
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Lucifer
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 09:05 am
I guess that's not too far away...So why don't we attach Dlowan last so she can be on the moon?
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Bella Dea
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 09:16 am
kickycan wrote:
Actually, this story starts out with a sex scene.
Better than "It was a cold, dark night..."
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dagmaraka
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 09:19 am
you can make a list of things readers are most likely to go for, create a template, and then pump them out like there's no tomorrow. i guess it's already done that way. but you can perfect it according to your likes.
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devriesj
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 09:29 am
Lucifer wrote:
I guess that's not too far away...So why don't we attach Dlowan last so she can be on the moon?
Good plan, Luc-.
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Lucifer
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 01:20 pm
So where do you think we are now?
(watch out, it's going to start smelling bad...)
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colorbook
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 03:01 pm
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devriesj
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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 03:12 pm
I'll get the nose plugs or do you prefer what the cornoners use - I think it's formeldahyde?
Dang it, had to edit!:
Thought I'd leave the measuring to you, Luc-, after all, the devil's in the details!
