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Wed 10 Nov, 2004 04:27 pm
It feels like I'm missing something
There's that one forgotten piece
The only one that
can complete the puzzle is
you
I like the surprise ending. The suspense by the third line had me gripping my seat.
its short and to the point.. not always a good thing... i think that maybe the lines to really add up.. mean they seem a bit broken
I agree with the mighty Seed. I think it is not complete, however. Have you more to add? I would love to see a fuller version.
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