Vex partially wrote:
Quote:an may i ask what images it does give? i know what it does for me but id like to know what it does for others
an ty for the feedback
Hi Vex,
I wrote the word 'partially' above, because complete and correct spelling are important. All of us like to abbreviate on our 'addresses', or our grocery lists- but leave only the
imagery to our discretion in your writing, please. I actually had to think a few moments to realize by 'ty' you meant 'thank you'. That is an expression worth standing OUT, when it is sincere.
To answer your question about the images this poetry does for me....
I see a sad person (the likes of what I have seen often in my long life),
feeling the effects of many
wasted hours.. hoping for a chance to do better.
From another perspective, I see a lonely teenager... having heard a scrambling of views and experience from others all through their short days-
now, having a hard time understanding or knowing what part to believe and what part to discredit.
It seems the warmth and light of a new day MIGHT offer hope in making good decisions.
I think your writing is deep and thought provoking. Keep it up.