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A Stolen Kiss...

 
 
stuh505
 
Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 02:10 pm
A snowflake took me by surprise
as I stepped outside today --
a snowflake kissed me on the lips,
and disappeared on my warm sigh.
It was winter, just saying hi.
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Lady J
 
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Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 02:25 pm
Re: A Stolen Kiss...
stuh505 wrote:
A snowflake took me by surprise
as I stepped outside today --
a snowflake kissed me on the lips,
and disappeared on my warm sigh.
It was winter, just saying hi.


I like that a lot!!
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Seed
 
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Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 03:21 pm
that was great stuh... love it very vivid description
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stuh505
 
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Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 05:35 pm
thanks guys Smile
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SCoates
 
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Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 06:09 pm
Cute. Smile
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Phoenix32890
 
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Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 06:16 pm
VERY nice!!!
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colorbook
 
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Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 08:01 pm
Nice stuh Smile
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Vex86
 
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Reply Mon 8 Nov, 2004 09:57 pm
nice
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2004 10:49 am
Wow Stuh. Powerful imagry in the simplest package. Extremely effective. Congrats!
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