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Sun 7 Nov, 2004 09:39 pm
He says you still love me.
He says he can see it in your eyes.
Tell me it's not true because
I don't think I can take the pain again.
You're everything I ever wanted in this life.
Everything I know i'll never have.
So now that i've almost accepted that
Please don't lead me on.
I've come this far, I don't want to be brought down.
Years of denial to make it all go away.
You made me everything I stand for.
Everything I am today.
I'm going to pretend that I didn't hear
what he just said.
And you will be as far away from me.
Never again to enter my head.
she says its in my eyes
yet eyes lie
just like you did to me
i saw it in your eyes
you looked right at me
yet the words were false
you didnt bat an eye
yet turned the world with 3 words
i thought you were honest
sorry, i should have made my own thread but i was inspired
No problem seed, it's very good....thanks for sharing.....I like how you say "eye's lie" becaus ethat they do!
Seed, I think you should come up with more to your poem, I think it's really good, but it needs more...more, more, more!!! Talk to you later!
The eyes are the gateway to the soul. Very nice piece, pessimist! Nice, indeed! I can see that :-)