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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 06:13 pm
I looked around.....it didn't seem right.
I listened.....no sound in sight.
I reached out.....but felt only cold air.
I screamed.....but no one was there.
I jumped....only my feet didn't leave the ground.
I'm lost....no where to be found.
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:30 pm
I shall come and look for you
grasp onto my hand
I shall pull you from the abyss
Hear me call your name
You are not lost
For found you are in me
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:33 pm
This hell I live in ohh so well
will not free me
For it is too strong
and I am too weak
Not even the strongest hand
could pull me to peace
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:36 pm
you shall be free
from the hell you reside
What can over come our love
not even the deepest despare
peace will be sweet
once we are together
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:39 pm
You can't handle this girl
she's out of control
she'll chew you up
she'll spit you up
she can't love
she's insane
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:40 pm
I looked around.....it didn't seem right.
I listened.....no sound in sight.
I reached out.....but felt only cold air.
I screamed.....but no one was there.
I jumped....only my feet didn't leave the ground.
I'm lost....no where to be found.
But now.... the double shower head
shall fill me.... with a sense of dread
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:42 pm
there she is
within my view
they all say shes crazy
yet its the little things i love
they say she'll tear me apart
yet pain is what i long for
let her pain be mine
and mine be hers
in a life of pain
happily everafter we will be
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:43 pm
If you showered at least annually
Gus you would see
that showering will make you feel free
Don't be afriad, walk towards water
The double shower heads will amaze you
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:49 pm
Seed wrote:
there she is
within my view
they all say shes crazy
yet its the little things i love
they say she'll tear me apart
yet pain is what i long for
let her pain be mine
and mine be hers
in a life of pain
happily everafter we will be


Oh my seed
where have you been all my life
I've always wanted someone as crazy as me.
If you want pain then that I can give
But if you want love, then I will cringe
Lead me to the life I desire
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:53 pm
apart we have been
yet together we now are
the path will be dark
yet our pain is the light
shall we walk hand in hand
as our pain flows through
you will know me
as i shall know you
cut by cut
scar by scar
each a memory
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:55 pm
I love, love, love it!!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:56 pm
Now just send me my plane ticket and i'll pack my bags!!
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 08:58 pm
glad you like... i'll start lookin for tickets Wink
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 09:00 pm
I'll be waiting, but until then, I have to get ready for bed....so nighty night.
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 3 Nov, 2004 09:02 pm
night night sleep tight
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Fri 5 Nov, 2004 05:00 pm
Seed....i'm baaaaack!!!
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Seed
 
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Reply Fri 5 Nov, 2004 06:29 pm
glad to see you back... been searching for tickets all day and night... where do you prefer to fly out of and i assume its first class or no class?
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Fri 5 Nov, 2004 07:36 pm
Hehe...now honestly....I am not materialistic, but if I can be, then why not? Sure, i'll take first class!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2004 10:34 am
You guys lost me on this one... A poem war?
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2004 05:07 pm
No...lol...we were just peoming with eachother......a different form of talking...hehe
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