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Tue 4 Feb, 2003 02:56 pm
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Welcome, gvapid. You're not alone.
Judge
You hurl you judgments my way
They land on indifferent ears
Your praises are unwanted
Emotions are all I hear
Contempt is not so easily,
Disguised by flowery words
A silence that echoes for ages says,
We're part of different worlds
CAN SOMEONE POST A REPLY To MY PoEM OR A CRITIQUE
I can't speak for littlek, but I had thought your poem was a response to our words of encouragement, and that you were irritated.
Glad to see I was mistaken.
It does effectively get across an emotion of contempt, which I take it you were going for.