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Dissapointments

 
 
gvapid
 
Reply Tue 4 Feb, 2003 02:56 pm
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littlek
 
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Reply Tue 4 Feb, 2003 02:57 pm
This is a good place for it.
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jespah
 
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Reply Tue 4 Feb, 2003 03:01 pm
Welcome, gvapid. You're not alone.
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gvapid
 
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Reply Tue 4 Feb, 2003 03:03 pm
Judge


You hurl you judgments my way
They land on indifferent ears
Your praises are unwanted
Emotions are all I hear

Contempt is not so easily,
Disguised by flowery words
A silence that echoes for ages says,
We're part of different worlds
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gvapid
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 11:50 am
CAN SOMEONE POST A REPLY To MY PoEM OR A CRITIQUE
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jespah
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2003 07:10 pm
I can't speak for littlek, but I had thought your poem was a response to our words of encouragement, and that you were irritated.

Glad to see I was mistaken.

It does effectively get across an emotion of contempt, which I take it you were going for.
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