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Seed
 
Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 02:53 pm
I used to hurt myself
Just to see if I felt
I used to shine light
Just to see if I saw
I have never felt
A love stronger then yours
I have never seen
A radience as bright as yours
Yet without you
I hurt unlike before
Without your light
I am blind before the world
I awake to find you
Beside me, you sleep
I close my eyes and breath deep
All the feelings still there
You touch me, barely
Yet it run through my body
I am alive to feel you
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 04:47 pm
Having those feelings suck, and it seems as if they never really ever go away.....now isn't that something to look forward to?
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Seed
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 07:23 pm
sadly yes
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stuh505
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 09:13 pm
what? they go away...
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 09:46 pm
stuh505 wrote:
what? they go away...


Do they?
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2004 10:24 am
Reminds me of 'Hurt' by Nine Inch Nails
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2004 05:26 pm
I love that song...one of my favorites!
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