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I Wanted To Be Invisible

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RobertLevin
 
Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 10:00 am
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 03:42 pm
Bravo!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 04:30 pm
Loved it. It reminded me of Daniel Evan Weiss's personification of cockroaches in 'The Roaches Have No King'.
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paulaj
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 06:57 am
It played out like a movie in my head. It was wonderful.
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 07:43 am
I can tell that Robert is a fan of Poe.
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paulaj
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 08:13 am
How can you tell, what gave it away?
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 08:54 am
gustavratzenhofer wrote:
I can tell that Robert is a fan of Poe.


I had a feeling you would say that.
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paulaj
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 09:06 am
cavfancier wrote:
gustavratzenhofer wrote:
I can tell that Robert is a fan of Poe.


I had a feeling you would say that.


I had a feeling you had a feeling. Want to feel me? Laughing
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 09:07 am
Do I have to pay?
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paulaj
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 09:08 am
cavfancier wrote:
Do I have to pay?


I'm not sure how I feel about that.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 09:11 am
I noticed that 'feel' was in italics. You're not speaking Norwegian are you?
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paulaj
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 09:15 am
No, not Norwegian...........Paulajian.
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Algis Kemezys
 
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Reply Sat 6 Nov, 2004 12:51 pm
Believe and you won't see what you want.
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