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Rap battles

 
 
Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 07:45 am
Edit [Moderator]: Moved from Music & Lyrics to Original Writing.

Anyone wanna battle?!
drop me 10 lines n ill spit bk
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stuh505
 
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Reply Fri 5 Nov, 2004 09:56 am
How can you battle without anything to work from? You need to know something about the person. I can't diss you without knowing who you are and what you look like. The whole concept is to expose the truth, but I don't know it...so sadly I can't battle you.
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tear jerked punk
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2004 08:46 pm
Aight you want your 10 lines? Here We GOO!!

Step back from the mic
This is my home tonight
What Stuh doesn't know is that
I can battle the best
I don't know you but still i'll own you!
I can't see you but still I defeated you.
Left in cold blood
Doctor says its a lyrical assassination.
So here I come back from the grave,
to school you kids, on the ways of rap.
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gangsta 313
 
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Reply Tue 23 Nov, 2004 06:14 pm
to tear_jerked_punk
u tell him to step back from the mic/
when ur the one nobody likes/
so u own him/
u probably f****n bone him/
such a homo/
u can't even let go/
ur a little b***h wit a 1 inch dick/
u comin back from the grave/
y ur still dead/
everyone hates ur rymes/
so y don't u do ur usuall and go give ur b***h some head
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mc j to the iggz
 
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Reply Tue 21 Dec, 2004 08:25 am
yo, so you say you from the 313
well stepup and tryta diss on me
ill piss on the wit my 9 inch d.i.C
you jump quick to the sign o' your dog wantin ta lick anya dick ya prick you's a mutha fuckin trick
igot the lyrical magic to reack havoc you faggott like bob saggott you cant havit
im untouchable
ill beat ya down wita fuckin lunchable
you crunch and munchable
you are distruckedable
and i will corrupt you all
watfch and laugh asyou fall
ima end it wita **** to all
you wanna get slaped holla
-one
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paradox04
 
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Reply Fri 24 Dec, 2004 07:31 pm
Paradox
A listen up all yall motha fukas is shitty
soundin like dudes that ghost write for p diddy
I read all of ya stuff and it sounds out dated
to me its simple for yall its just to complicated
lookin up every other word in the dictionary
thats why yall dont compare to me soundin overly ordinary
little kids playin a grown mans game
that all sound the same so very very lame
pussies from day one so who comes near me, none
actin like yall are gangsta but probably aint never seen a gun
i don t even give a **** cuz i dont mess wit rookies
battlin you chumps is the only time id eat a pussy
im talkin bout all yall cuz i wanna challenge the first time i spoke
shovin my lyrics down ya throat, ohp don't choke
cuz i dont make mistakes cant be stopped like i aint got brakes
in 16 im done, i could do more but this is all it takes
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Ray
 
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Reply Tue 28 Dec, 2004 06:52 pm
I never liked rap
'cause lots of them are crap
People trying to be cool;
Trying to make you drool
At the women they put in their videos
And trying to look like little romeos
When they know what they're saying
Are just a bunch of swearing.
Britney Spears ain't no different
than those rap tyrant;
The gangsters,
The smokers,
What's the point of it all?
Trying to look like the rapper on TV
when they're junks on MTV.
They got no respect,
I should have little for their style.
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paradox04
 
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Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2005 09:30 am
listen up ray you really sound gay when you say
you dont like rap shoulda just kept that **** in ya head
what, are you gothic or a rock kid lets get back to what you said
that most of us are crap, well only when i **** on you
wit ya simple rhymes cuz you had nothin better to do
probably live up in the suburbs wit your dark clothes
actin like your emotionally scared cuz you cant get no hoes
just tryin to get attention i understand i know how it goes
and how dare this little chump compare me to brittany spears
bitch i been doin this for years while you were still in the cradle with your peers
whats the point you ask YOU MUST BE A DUMB ASS
its just to get a little bit of cash that will last past
the 16 of the month cuz we decided not pay attention in class
so we dont gotta live on the block where guns blast
and **** MTV to me that stands for minimal televised videos
all thats left is outdated rock and garbage reality TV shows
now that i think about im really startin to think you are gay
ima call you seemen cuz you only get a nut when you see men is that OK ray
and we aint got no respect huh, well ok that maybe true
but not always just when im talkin about ya mom and you
so the next time you wanna go runnin at your jaws
check wit me first so i can remind you of the lyrical laws
1 dont try to diss a rapper if you cant rap
2 dont rap if ya not prepared to make a comback
3 dont talk about things you know nothing about
4 unless your better than the next man dont go runnin your mouth
dont even come back to this site cuz next time you aint makin it out
and dont come back talkin bout you aint scared and you can compete
cuz you aint gotta be scared to lyrically get your ass beat

HOW YOU LIKE THEM APPLES BIATCH
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Ray
 
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Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2005 11:04 pm
It seems like paradox's obsessed with gays,
couldn't make a better insult to make his day.
All he is doing is just denying
the little drop of truth that's making him crying.
And what's that about me being a Goth?
Dare call me that when you're the antisocial sloth?
face the fact little whiner,
most rap are nowadays,
a bunch of swearing shits.

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On a sidenote: no offence dude, I just don't like most rap songs. Peace.
There's a neverending rap battle thread above this one, might want to check it out.
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paradox04
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2005 09:25 pm
paradox isnt obssessed wit homosexuals
to me gay means ya ignorant and that you have no balls
when you said you didnt like rap i just lost it
so i had to speak my mind no matter what it costed
guess i kinda went out of line callin you gothic
but man you dissin the music i live for so dont mock it
and cursin is just a curse we got to show anger and frustration
so instead of dissin you im just tellin the truth in relation
to 90% of the artists who put their hearts in thier rhymes
who had to fight to the top through all the bad times
and honestly i think you need to put a little more thought into ya lyrics
cuz what ya sayin is hot but give some emotion in it so they fear it
this is just my point of view brought to you, ONE
you can holla back if you want but im done

unless all you wanna do is talk ****
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gangsta 313
 
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Reply Wed 19 Jan, 2005 02:52 pm
Anyone want to battle me!! well step up
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sed2003
 
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Reply Wed 19 Jan, 2005 03:17 pm
i'm back on this mic no need for applause
just give me a second to state my cause
me i dont beef with u other rappers but
use my name in vain its u i comin after
cause my flow is disabling the bullets
will clear your face like mabaline
now what make u thinl u can rap like this
when 97% of your fans dont and we all
know who that 3 go to your mama ya
bitch and u
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50cent101
 
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Reply Sat 22 Jan, 2005 07:03 pm
who wanna battle
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El-Diablo
 
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Reply Sat 22 Jan, 2005 08:17 pm
I hate "gangster" white kids who think they can rap. Freestyling good is an art and does not constitute make random insults and throwin the words nigga and balls and muthafucker every other word.
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Xcutioner
 
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Reply Sun 23 Jan, 2005 04:39 pm
yo sup all u ppl..im a new kid in da block..im checkin out som rhymes..holla 2 da ppl keepin it real
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Scraps
 
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Reply Sun 30 Jan, 2005 03:07 pm
paradox sound like he get his **** out a box
his raps r mailed to him from p diddy
this boy prolly from the suburbs he dont even no the word gritty
man wats it take for u 2 c u suck
ur raps r washed up
just sit back take a seat n watch these real niggaz keep it street
just grab ur hat n jacket n leave the racket
cuz ur gonna get lyrically killed
lyrically filled
wit words as sharp as bullets
n ray u homosexual punk
i dont no wat u thunk
when u wrote rap is crap
boy u say it again n u'll get slapped
ur words have got u trapped
u little bitch dont ever come here wit that **** again
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Moev 8
 
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Reply Mon 31 Jan, 2005 03:10 pm
Listen here 50cent101
You wanna battle then lets go
Little punk without funk
I'll stuff you in the back of my trunk
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Scraps
 
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Reply Mon 31 Jan, 2005 08:33 pm
moev everyonce in a while i make ur bitch smile
cuz i rap so good i can make her wild
cuz the chics dig it n they gotta love the style of the illest rapper from here to the nile
yeah dog fosheezi
i hope u no ur honey likes to please me n we **** till im all wheezy
but i got ur back dog ill even give u a job
u just gotta get me the food when i want it n when got the urge u gotta get me some chronic
boy when i rap im faster than...sonic...for the master of the sport
even all over the court
n i dont mean the law
i mean basketball
dont **** wit scraps ill put u in ur casket n thats not all
ill come to ur funeral n shoot all over n over like ronaldo
ur whole crew go hidin like wheres waldo

u wanna battle some1 come get some scraps will fight ya
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50cent101
 
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Reply Tue 1 Feb, 2005 08:44 pm
moev u cant beat me im unstopable
Moev 8 wrote:
Listen here 50cent101
You wanna battle then lets go
Little punk without funk
I'll stuff you in the back of my trunk
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Scraps
 
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Reply Tue 1 Feb, 2005 09:13 pm
i guess i gotta go first i'll try ta finish up before ur bedtime

somebody hold me back
im unstoppable
i got more guns than i mothafuckin arsenal
watch ur back man
i got range like a cop man
i got speed like a track man
n agility too
u'll never see me slack man till i run up n slap ya man
if u think u can battle me
scraps will eat u up like pacman
u tryin ta put me to the test
got me battlin a chic who got no breasts
y u got me battlin a chic
especially 1 whos whack wit a dick
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